Quotes / Six Word Memoir

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March 20, 2009

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February 27, 2009

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February 21, 2009

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September 19, 2008

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I don’t know… maybe it’s because I’m still a bit young, but I don’t really get the quote. I like the way it sounds; it reminds me of a “cheer up, this will get better” kind of quote. It’s still lovely.

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September 01, 2008

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good but try to think outside of the box make it a little more original

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August 18, 2008

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I hate to say it, but; What? Can’t quite wrap around that one being a memoir.  Sorry.

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August 03, 2008

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How can you manage to be so ungrammatical with only six words from which to choose?

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July 27, 2008

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Poetry and quotations are so much harder to write than actual novels.  It’s take a lot more focus to say what you want in so few words.  I admire that, but I also have a sense or realism knowing that critics are a lot harder on poets than any other writer.  I love your quotes, but finding a place to publish it may be tricky.
Good luck though, and good work.

JuneLyte avatar General Stranger

July 23, 2008

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Not quite understanding your point here, but it is creative!

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July 22, 2008

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nice visualisation, but far from a life story.

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