Journal, Diary, & Blogging / Prismaticly

The first three words are divine, while the second three are trying too hard.  I wonder what else you can say to expand the quote..

well stated, and I like the capitals at the begining of Monotone, and Prismatic… gives good empsis

Woah.

Purposeful and truthful.

Yearning for simplicity, and yet ending up…....elsewhere.

Monotone/prismatic: Rare and powerfully descriptive words.

Nicely done.

I like it, even though I  had to think about what it meant—it wasn’t immediately apparent.

i read ur piece and i thought it was unclear to me and didnt have a meaning to it. it didnt have anything to it and i didnt like it. sorry better luck next time.

An intelligent idea, well expressed.  6 word flash fiction – it can’t really get too much shorter (I guess one word FF would be taking it to the limit).

I am not 100% sure on the definition of prsimatic, however the word itself with the connotations it brings forth suits very well the sentence as a whole.

This is a reasonable effort, all things considered.  It has a subtle drama to it, shown in how a life lived in one ideology, driven by another, is a contrast of hopes or dreams being tormented by the situation found in life.  It defines its life and existence, yet is tormented (apparently) by the opposing factor giving it no rest.

A decent effort.