Poetry / Knocked Up Forever (Analysis)

wowo this one made me laugh and then I thought back to a tie long ago and laughed again. You hit the nail on the head.

That is f*!#ing HILARIOUS!

i read ur piece and i thought it was pretty funny and i thught u were going to say something like u are pregnant or something. but overall it was good. good luck next time.

I hope you mean forever expectant
nice job

Wow! That says alot about life, doesn’t it?

It’s clever.  I suspect it’s more meaningful to women than men, and to mothers particularly.  But the basic metaphor is clear and even those of us without wombs should be able to relate.