Humor/Satire / Easy Way Out (Six-Word Memior) (Analysis)

Okay I know you have the whole six word format but that is kinda cheesy. Not so much humorous. I think you have done better work

This was very clever. Your choice of words actually makes the title stand out more.

Too easy!, if it is supposed to be a memoir, you need to work a little harder at it and first check the definition of “memoir”
“Do I have six words yet?” is way too easy, you did not strain your gray matter on this one.
It would actually be funny in a longer context.
Try a gain
I have the feeling you’ll find something  good.
PIM

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July 21, 2008

by _Marybeth_

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Ahh, this reviews keep getting meaner =P. As I’ve said before in other comments, my life is about the easy way out, why do you have to do things a hard way if you can find an easy way out and still get the same result? But if you insist, I may try the hard way and try again =D I still like this one though..teehee

July 22, 2008

by PIMckenzie

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It does not have to be the “Hard” way, but this one was way too easy.  You obviously have the sense of humor and the talent.  Then why be lazy and remain in third place when you could at least lift your pen so it can transcribe your thoughts and reach the top.
I know, I am lazy when it is not hard, so I kick myself in the bum and try.
let me know if I make sense to you.
PIM

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‘URBIS & SMITH mag. want you to describe your life as a writer, artist, or raconteur in six well-chosen words’
I don’t feel you met those requirements.
no life expression in a humorous question.
It was humorous though.

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July 21, 2008

by _Marybeth_

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My life as an artist is kind of like an easy way out. Usually not with poetry, but like in art class…I try and just get an easy way out, pick the easiest thing to draw, etc.

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I know people are probably going to hit this hard, but I laughed when I read this.  It’s good to see a bit of humor, even if it’s the short way out.  Ha!

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July 21, 2008

by _Marybeth_

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Thanks you! I hope I make people laugh with this, and hopefully I dont get reviews like “You make a mockery of this whole thing”...yah know? I’m glad I made you laugh =D

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Cute. But stick with writing and forget about your accounting career.

Doc

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July 20, 2008

by _Marybeth_

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HAHA..true true..well at least I can count a bit, or I would be skrewed at work :P

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I like it. Very humorous. Does this also describe your mentality as a writer? It does mine; when I’m writing something I don’t want to write, word count becomes my best enemy.

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July 20, 2008

by _Marybeth_

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Lol kind of, but see with word count, that is why you use Microsoft Word, they have word count..teehee…see easy way out ;)

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i read ur six word memior and i liked it alot. it was very funny, but i also think u cheated them out of saying ” Do I have six words yet?” but it was very funny and i enjoyed it at the same time. so good luck and keep on writing ur funnyness. :D

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July 20, 2008

by _Marybeth_

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Lol. You say I cheated my way out, I just think of it as the easy way out :D that is the reason why I titled this “Easy Way Out” :P

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