Non-fiction / 6 word memoir

That would make an excellent tag-line for something!

IM not sure your clarity is all there. You might want to explain why you fell through the cracks. I’m sure though, that it will be a winderful memoir! I think that you should spend a little more time thinking about how your going to explain it.

Nice memior. In six words we know you.

As six-word memoirs go, this is pretty clear. It does get me pondering the phrase “falling between the cracks” (neglected, overlooked) and wondering about the types of situations it might refer to throughout a lifetime.

I thought it was very good. It’s hard to sum up a lifetime in 6 words, but you did a good job of doing it.

It’s okay.  Not terribly original but invokes pretty good imagery.  Maybe you can find a way to say the same thing more uniquely?

I think of it as spending my life always in hard times.

Oh, the quirks of the English language! This is publishable, but does not make sense without an “a” before “life”. Just a thought: maybe you could reword this as “A life spent falling between cracks” instead. Powerful image, though. Peace.

This line actually portrays something.  A feeling of woe.  We all feel this way from time to time and I’m sure writers feel this way a lot!  Well done.

Very good 6 word memoir. I love the imagery and clarity.