Short Story / Artistic Endeavor (6 word Memoir) (Analysis)

All in all, a nice rumination on the creative process thats sums it up succinctly and poetically. I like it.

E.B.S.E.C.S.

Secbes
Beescs

Ok, maybe the capitalization of each word held no significance. As a six word expression of the “artistic endeavor”, it’s a success.  Exploration and sharing are essential in making us more complete human being which allows us, at our best moments, to truly celebrate ourselves.  

Nicely Put.  Thanks for sharing.  Oh!  Number 2!  I think you deserve to celebrate.

Please rethink your choice of words.  Less succinctly put – basically you have three two word sentences here and forgive me, but the sentences are almost trite.  You can do better.  Think – how often have you heard those sentences?  They’re everywhere – in every piece of inspirational, self-help, motivational, touchy-feely work out there.  Your job at this point is to find different words that say the same thing. I like the 4-5-4 syllable balance you’ve got going. Maintaining that yet using different language will definately be a challenge.