Poetry / ?

Hi there, hope things are going okay for you and not as dark as this piece suggests. I love the flow, the raw, exposed emotional damage. I copied it here to point out a couple of tiny items i spotted. I think it will help with the flow even more so. You know I love your style, never change that, for anyone. Please take good care. stu…

I love a man I never had.
I long (for) happiness without the sad.
I feel the pain others don’t.
I’ve done the deeds others won’t.
I hide myself from all but you.
I speak the words that are all but true.
I need the love you hide from me.
I need to feel what I cannot see.
Screw the world and its faultless glory.
I tell the tale that is much more gory.
I feel the blood from my body leave.
I held (hold) the the load you could (can) not heave.
I am the ghost of love that’s lost.
I am the night that screams out the cost.

Just a couple of tense boo boo’s. A wonderfully dark piece! Keep posting or else…