Short Story / 6 words for a creative life

Wordsmith: Always working, very seldom published!

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Herowriter avatar General Stranger

July 25, 2008

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July 21, 2008

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Though it is a close call for me, I would have to say that this line more closely adheres to the criterion for the memoir.  I feel like this could be applied to your own life, and to many other’s.  It is also fun to boot!  My only suggestion would be perhaps changing a word, or tweaking it in some way to more accurately portray your life.  Thank you for the opportunity to read and review your work!

ValCapone avatar General Stranger

July 20, 2008

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True enough, but this isn’t a story yet. Develop this so it inspires questions, as in the Hemingway baby shoes example.

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July 20, 2008

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Very humerous and oh, so true.  I enjoyed this.

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July 20, 2008

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This is very funny. Because everyone who’s a writer, especially amateur, can relate to this.

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July 19, 2008

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Sounds exhausting!  Have fun  

Continue to enjoy writing ! From a fellow friend in writing!

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July 19, 2008

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Great submission.

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July 19, 2008

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Hahahaa, this seems to be the dilemma of every writer. We work and work and seem to never get published. But, alas, it’s really not that important to the writer who writes for more reasons than that. I enjoyed this, it’s a reminder of things we all face. I appreciate it very much.

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