Short Story / 6 word memior of my dad (Analysis)

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July 23, 2008

Foster

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128	93.6% (47 votes)	32.0%

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29	M	Wallkill, NY	June 20

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July 19, 2008

Sweettouch

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271	66.4% (140 votes)	26.3%

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44	F	Walsenburg, CO	March 02

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Loved it!

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July 19, 2008

BPL

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301	52.6% (116 votes)	23.5%

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32	F	United States	September 23

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July 19, 2008

ValCapone

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13	55.2% (29 votes)	-3.6%

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31	F	Canada	July 24

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July 19, 2008

Nosnibor

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114	81.2% (32 votes)	27.3%

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34	M	United Kingdom	October 22

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July 19, 2008

HCWriter

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17	82.4% (17 votes)	54.5%

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17	F	United Kingdom	July 29

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I did not read your comments, if I’m honest. This is because I believe if the six word memoir was good enough, it would need no explaining. It put me off it, a little. However, I did like your six words, and it did make sense without reading the story in your comments. It made me think of hoarders, and a garage sale hunters. It was amusing and sweet, but not very strong. Perhaps work on it so it does not need a story go with it.