Flash Fiction / Motivation

“You’ll never make it,” he said.

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Platytee avatar General Stranger

October 24, 2009

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October 09, 2009

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I think this one is too negative. It’s a line we’ll all hear at some time, but not one that will sum up the writer’s life. It’s also gender specific, in that the criticiser was a man. May or may not be relevant, but if you’re trying to sum up ‘the creative life’ I would have thought it was- both men and women can criticise, be creative, and be editors.

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December 26, 2008

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good title, good six words.

not much to criticize. “he” is a fine pinpoint instead of “they.” makes it more personal. everyone has a “he” or a “she” who tried to step on their neck at some point.

well done. write on, friend-o.

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