Flash Fiction / Story of my life

Got born. Worked. Struggled. Still struggling.

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July 19, 2008

BPL

No. of Reviews	Overall Quality	Comment Followup
301	52.6% (116 votes)	23.5%

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32	F	United States	September 23

BPL reviewed Version 1 - Read 100% of the Item

I would like it better if you ended it with as happer tone ,but i am not the writter .Flowed well .

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July 20, 2008

Corruptedstatic

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157	87.6% (97 votes)	39.0%

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23	M	SF, CA	October 08

Corruptedstatic reviewed Version 1 - Read 100% of the Item

Very blunt and to the point. It feels like it reads. This piece shows a glimpse of how the writer may be viewing life. And it’s obvious that is very bland and colorless. If that is what the writer was trying to portray. Points for being very clear but I can’t say this piece envoked me with much emotion. Good luck. :)