Flash Fiction / Story of my life

Got born. Worked. Struggled. Still struggling.

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Corruptedstatic avatar General Stranger

July 20, 2008

Corruptedstatic

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Very blunt and to the point. It feels like it reads. This piece shows a glimpse of how the writer may be viewing life. And it’s obvious that is very bland and colorless. If that is what the writer was trying to portray. Points for being very clear but I can’t say this piece envoked me with much emotion. Good luck. :)

BPL avatar General Stranger

July 19, 2008

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I would like it better if you ended it with as happer tone ,but i am not the writter .Flowed well .

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Age: 33
Loc: United Kingdom
Gen: M
Last Login: August 11
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