Flash Fiction / In short, a life.

I like the idea, but you could save a word by using ellipses instead of “All”. The word “Many” is vague when you could use a word that would give your life more character. “Yellow” things happened. Whatever. Your “life” needs more character.

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October 22, 2009

by Nosnibor

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I certainly take your point. However, I was more aiming for the idea of the ‘everyman’ – the idea that life for so many is so bland, so characterless, so lacking in direction. Haardly uplifting, I suppose, but there you have it….

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Well, it’s short, concise, and clever, which is what you want in these pieces. My one quibble would be the word “all”. All happened by accident? “Most” would probably work better.

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July 14, 2009

by Nosnibor

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Y’know, that’s not a bad suggestion, thanks.

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