Flash Fiction / Artistic Achievement

i love these six-word memoirs. this one brought a wry grin to my face.

I found this peiece a bit humorous. I like how you played with the readers expectations, I thought It was going to read like this “start with nothing, end with everything” but your humor pulled off and you pulled a fast one on us. Good job. I’m not sure what this really says about the writer though. Perhaps the end result of this contest will tell. :)

Thats kinda of down .I get it but I want more . I would like more of your opnion of your thoughts with this .

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July 19, 2008

by Nosnibor

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I’m usually quite wordy in my writing and thought that working to the 6-word rule would be a good exercise in concise writing. I was sort of aiming for a Bukowski-esque throwaway style… down, perhaps, but not necessarily out.

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