Non-fiction / Suicide Note Memoir

lol

Very good.  Straight to the point.  Funny irony.

Well done.

I read your pieace and I didn’t like it. The reason why I didn’t like it is because I don’t like reading about suicide and like when u said ” Ive failed at everything ut death”. that sounds like you might try and and do something like take ur own life away or at least try to and do something crazy at that.

short simple to the point.

Alright, so the message is clear in this piece. The writer has conveyed that they have failed at everything accept for the one thing they have no tried. This is a very depressing statement. Though powerful. I wish I myself could convince that failure is not person but an event. Death, well death doesn’t require much trying. A+ for conveying your message. See you don’t fail at everything. :)