Non-fiction / Six Word Memoir III

I read ur pieace, I didn’t like it cuz to me it sounds like you ar just giving up on urself. I hope you are not, with whatever you are doing. I hope u keep ur chin up and try and pass threw the phase you are going threw. I hope this sheds some light on u and ur pieace.

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July 19, 2008

by Aten2727

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31	M	Cincinnati, OH	July 20

thanks for the feedback but this memoir does not accurately depict who I am at all.  It was written to  convey emotion.  Thanks!

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The review area is FULL of these six word things.  I am sick and tired of them.

Yours however was one of the good ones.  It made the point and comments on the human condition.

It’s such a downer and holds a bit of truth, not necessarily for II, but in being in the mind of someone with this sentiment towards life.  Hope that makes sense.

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July 19, 2008

by Aten2727

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What do you mean by “not necessarily for II”?

July 19, 2008

by Fenvy

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I mean in the context of your previous submission.  This piece obviously stands alone with it’s emotion towards life, whereas your memoir II holds a positive meaning.  I’m getting lost in my words…sorry if I confused you.

July 19, 2008

by Aten2727

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I see, I didn’t pick up on the reference to my other piece!  Thanks for replying!

July 19, 2008

by Fenvy

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No problem, I like it when us writers reply to each other’s pieces, it’s important for more clarity, as we just experienced.  =P

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