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Non-fiction / Six Word Memoir III
In the end I’ll have failed.
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eminemslove85 reviewed Version 1 -
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I read ur pieace, I didn’t like it cuz to me it sounds like you ar just giving up on urself. I hope you are not, with whatever you are doing. I hope u keep ur chin up and try and pass threw the phase you are going threw. I hope this sheds some light on u and ur pieace.
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Fenvy reviewed Version 1 -
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It’s such a downer and holds a bit of truth, not necessarily for II, but in being in the mind of someone with this sentiment towards life. Hope that makes sense.
inkstained reviewed Version 1 -
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The review area is FULL of these six word things. I am sick and tired of them.
Yours however was one of the good ones. It made the point and comments on the human condition.
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