Quotes / The Irony of a Six Word Memoir

Honestly, six words can’t describe me.

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Willow_Wren avatar General Stranger

July 20, 2008

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It makes a statement, a point, but it’s not a memoir alas. A memoir does not describe you but tells your life in a compact form…go ahead and try it, you can do it, it’s fun! LOL

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August 11, 2008

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six words cant describe anyone, a whole book coul barely describe someone. We all change with the times, we are shape shifters in a sense. We can’t stand still for too long.

Good quote.

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July 20, 2008

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Amen. I love this. It will be among my favorites. Now we know how complicated you are,and probably interesting too. It is very clever. I wish i had thought of it first, Sandi

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July 20, 2008

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I loved this. You amused me, made your point clear, plus met the criteria.

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July 20, 2008

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What I love about irony is that it never gets old and you clearly have a knack for it. I like memoir. this piece speaks loudly about the writer’s personality and how they veiw themselves. Though this piece is charming I would still prefer something a bit more personal, this only touches the surface and leaves much room for specualaion. Good JOb though and GOod luck. :)

beej avatar General Stranger

July 23, 2008

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Yes, I read your notes, but I’ll still give a review. “Honestly” is cliche, as are adverbs in general. Keep trying.

NightRainbow avatar General Stranger

July 22, 2008

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This really gets my interest!  It speaks of a lot of action and detail to follow.  I like this one a lot.

Treatsa avatar General Stranger

August 18, 2008

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Honestly seems a little false here.  I’d almost perfer to here “Six words can’t describe me, yet.” or something.

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August 05, 2008

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nt bad, almost got a laugh :)

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July 21, 2008

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You’ve rebelled against the constraints of the contest, and stayed within the constraints, and probably described a bit of yourself in the process.  I think you’re entry is fun and made me think a bit.

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