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Honestly, six words can’t describe me.

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jdgosslee avatar General Stranger

July 26, 2008

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  I just don’t feel that this is an adequate memoir, the statement asks for attention, identifies with everybody, includes a universal truth, but does not give me anything to take with me.  Nice job on punctuation.  

Sharon avatar General Stranger

July 20, 2008

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Actually, a good writer could probably do it with only one word.  I like your quote though.  Good luck.

Nvr2Young2Write avatar General Stranger

August 28, 2008

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This was hillarious. Mostly because it’s so true! Six words cannot describe someone! Unless they were incredibly boring and lived underneath a rock. Even then he/she could describe what color the rock was and how it felt being mushed up all the time. Nice job.

CourtshipLives avatar General Stranger

July 30, 2008

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that is ironic how you described yourself in six words by saying you couldn’t describe yourself in six words. sorry i couldnt tell you that in less words :/
nevertheless, hilarious. your chances are good.

Static avatar Random Review

August 04, 2008

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Hahaha this is great! Its an ironic irony! Its ironic that you can’t really describe yourself in a 6 word “momoir”, as you have stated. However, it’s ALSO ironic that in saying that you cannot describe yourself in 6 words you have, in fact, described yourself and even told us a lot about yourself (for one, you must be a complex person if the only way to describe yourself in 6 words is to state that you cannot be described in 6 words).

I love irony, I don’t know why… ESPECIALLY this kind of irony which is, in and of itself, also ironic.

So for the double irony and a well written and comical piece, you get high marks

Souldierpoet avatar General Stranger

August 13, 2008

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Unique, good play on words given the circumstances.  

sjvance avatar General Stranger

August 08, 2008

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I totally agree with you!  Describing myself in six words has been a much bigger task than I thought possible.  I love this, do not change a word.

cooljim102055 avatar General Stranger

July 19, 2008

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hi there,

come on now..you can do better than that..6 words can summarize anyone..it may not be very well but it can…:) like mine i must say,:)...try another one, jim

Aten2727 avatar General Stranger

July 19, 2008

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I think you’ve created something very true and funny here!  It works well as a memoir and tells me who you are as a person.  I truly like it and wouldn’t change a thing!  And yes, its ironic.  Good luck!

stephanloy avatar General Stranger

August 02, 2008

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Short and banal. Actually, six words can go a long way toward describing almost anything or anyone, but you have to make that reader deconstruction phenomenom work for you. You plant the seed through suggestion within abstraction, then let the reader fill in the other three or four hundred words.

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