Non-fiction / Six-word contest, entry 3.

I’m a bit torn by this one.  I get clear visuals from the statement, but it evokes two distinct pictures:  one of the pinned butterfly, and one of hurricane mastery.  I’m afraid it simply doesn’t flow for me, but it is only my opinion, and may suit others well.  Regardless, thank you for the opportunity to see your work.

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July 19, 2008

by great_thrones

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It sort of relates to the old phrase “a butterfly flapping its wings on the other side of the world can cause hurricanes here”; like, some small thing causes great change by a ripple effect.  And if you can control the small things, maybe you can change the world.  It is hard to be clear, though, in six words.  Thank you for your review.

July 19, 2008

by DarkHuntress

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Oh, I absolutely agree, it is very difficult, and I certainly cannot do it!  I was actually wondering if you were alluding to that, and having the knowledge that you were makes it very clear to me.  Thank you for explaining!

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Very creative. In a sense it says stability keeps you well grounded. But I’m not sure how good stability is. Sometimes its good just to go with the flow and be free. Good job and good luck. :)

powerful imagery is very good, as is the contrast between hard and soft. In my estimation, one of the very best so far.