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Non-fiction / 6 word memoir - Self absorbed

I can’t help but be vain.

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ELBSeattle avatar General Stranger

September 14, 2008

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This made me smile. It reminds me of the line, ‘Self absorbed? How do you think that makes ME feel?’ Or, ‘Pretentious? Moi?’

I hope this was written ironically …

DarkHuntress avatar General Stranger

July 19, 2008

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I love this line!  How very human.

weikelm avatar General Stranger

July 19, 2008

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I like it.  It is honest and made me laugh.  I’m not sure it tells a story though.  But then what can you do in 6 words?

NightRainbow avatar General Stranger

July 19, 2008

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A bit generic—’It” needs expanded to capture attention.

eminemslove85 avatar General Stranger

July 19, 2008

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I read ur pieace….i didn’t know what VAIN ment so I looked it up and I re-read ur pieace again and didn’t understand it, it was unclear to me. Why are you Vain and why  can’t you help being Vain? I think this pieace just makes people ask the word “why”. it doesnt really do much for me.

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