Non-fiction / 6 word memoir-Makes Sense.

I mean, I like it, it does the job, it’s cute.  But I don’t see it as being a memoir.  But I do like it, maybe better as a quote than a six word memoir, but it is good.

i read ur pieace of the memior it was very good and i liked i alot the one thing that was weird about it is, it brings u to u senses and shouldnt it do the oppose of doing that? u know since it i alchoial???? thats a little iffy on my part but overall i thought it was very nice.

Hahaha I love it! I find that it’s vodka that’s both my vice and muse. Good luck with the competition!

since i cant write new lines without alchohol. I truely fel this one

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August 05, 2008

by Corruptedstatic

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lol!!!!!!!!

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I must say, this doesn’t really resonate with me. But then, I don’t drink. The trick of 6-word memoirs is to pack in as many ideas as possible, though, and you’ve done a good job of that, playing with our expectations (wine doesn’t usually make people -more- sensible) and, presumably, telling us something about your personal writing life. So, well done.

I enjoyed your work.  Very true for many – for creativity, for self awareness, ha, and also self illusion.  Good luck!

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July 20, 2008

by Corruptedstatic

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Thanks a bunch.

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I know it’s not too creative, but I can only say that I loved it. I get the idea that many of us feel a “sense” of clarity after a little wine and the usual resulting conversation or activities that might go with it. Everything is brighter and somehow more easily felt, seen, heard…..sensed.

Me too!  Delightfully amusing, honest and identifiable.

Very funny and amusing!  This could easily sum up your whole life in six words!  Good job.  However, you may want to look into Alcoholic’s Anonymous! ;)

Very good and to the point. Funny, made me laugh, because doesn’t it do just the reverse? smile