Non-fiction / 6 word memoir-Makes Sense.

Wine brings me to my senses.

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August 04, 2008

Static

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Hahaha I love it! I find that it’s vodka that’s both my vice and muse. Good luck with the competition!

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August 05, 2008

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since i cant write new lines without alchohol. I truely fel this one

eloriane avatar General Stranger

July 20, 2008

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I must say, this doesn’t really resonate with me. But then, I don’t drink. The trick of 6-word memoirs is to pack in as many ideas as possible, though, and you’ve done a good job of that, playing with our expectations (wine doesn’t usually make people -more- sensible) and, presumably, telling us something about your personal writing life. So, well done.

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July 19, 2008

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I saw this one earlier and really loved it.  Writers and booze…it says so much.  Is it the secret to good writing?  Who knows?  I had a good laugh too.  Good luck on the contest!

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July 20, 2008

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I enjoyed your work.  Very true for many – for creativity, for self awareness, ha, and also self illusion.  Good luck!

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July 19, 2008

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I got a kick out of this one, and indeed it actually made me smile.  I think it was simply how ludicrous the statement is, and how very dead-pan it seems in black and white.  Bravo!

MissyE avatar General Stranger

September 27, 2008

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I know it’s not too creative, but I can only say that I loved it. I get the idea that many of us feel a “sense” of clarity after a little wine and the usual resulting conversation or activities that might go with it. Everything is brighter and somehow more easily felt, seen, heard…..sensed.

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November 19, 2008

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Me too!  Delightfully amusing, honest and identifiable.

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July 19, 2008

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Very funny and amusing!  This could easily sum up your whole life in six words!  Good job.  However, you may want to look into Alcoholic’s Anonymous! ;)

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October 23, 2008

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Very good and to the point. Funny, made me laugh, because doesn’t it do just the reverse? smile

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