Non-fiction / Life Story--Six Words

This is really good! This is the first memoir I’ve seen that used the words well enough to present a metaphor AND expand on it a little bit while STILL giving the reader a fair bit of thinking to do. Well done!!

Funnily enough, I’ve actually seen a rainbow at night time (most people think it’s impossible… But it’s not; all you need is moisture particles in the air (preferably raindrops) and a bright enough light shining through them from behind you (sun OR moon). It’s not nearly as bright and cheery as a day-time rainbow though, btw; more like a gothic rainbow (all different shades of gray)

You might want to, however, add a space between “Night” and “Rainbow” as Urbis is saying that you’re only using 5 words. THEN you might want to enter this into the competition while you still have a chance.

Good work and good luck!

Wow! very powerful. You’re either a very positive person to be around, or gay. ;-)

I guess the first two words are missing their space – shame, I thought you were submitting a 5 word review, which could be quite a good way of breaking the rules.