Thanks for the review. I’m a firm believer of people forming their own conclusions – some do others don’t. Having said that – “Penny drops” is a metaphor – not meant to be taken literally.
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Keyboard clatter. Penny drops. No matter.
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eminemslove85 reviewed Version 1 -
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i read ur peace….i havent ever read one like it…it was very differenet and alittle uncle to mean didnt make much sense in a way.
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Aten2727 reviewed Version 1 -
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This is a humorous little piece but falls short of a memoir. It doesn’t tell me much about your life, your attitude, or your emotions! I think you’ve got talent for telling something amusing in six words but this isn’t really a memoir in my opinion. Good luck!
blueeyes reviewed Version 1 -
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it sounds like you are intensely focused when writing, nice.
Gardenia reviewed Version 1 -
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I think this speaks of concentration with brevity.
Blue_Eyes reviewed Version 1 -
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I’m afraid that I don’t understand the connection between keyboards and pennies. Is it, “You shouldn’t write expecting to make money.” “You should write for the sake of writing.” Am I even close? :)
alexianx reviewed Version 1 -
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It lacks clarity, at least to me. Penny drops is meant to be representation of not making much money as a writer? That’s the closest I can decipher it and even then it’s obscure.
sjvance reviewed Version 1 -
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I like it! Write no matter what. We are all driven that way, aren’t we?
shadowedxrain reviewed Version 1 -
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This is very different…it has a unique flavor to it, and that adds to it. The word choices make the reader question what it may be about, and that gives the piece strength. The staccato punctuation of the period usage is extremely effective, as well.
cooljim102055 reviewed Version 1 -
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hi there,
something tells me you write lyrics for songs/which i do too, and have dropped things on my keyboard/but i stink anyway, so it don’t matter..the matter/clatter ryhme also is clever..(another clue of a songwriter..:)..nice one, jim
neophytepoetess reviewed Version 1 -
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My immediate reaction was that it reminded me of Dorothy Parker.
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