Non-fiction / Write On!

I’m afraid that I don’t understand the connection between keyboards and pennies. Is it, “You shouldn’t write expecting to make money.” “You should write for the sake of writing.” Am I even close? :)

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October 29, 2008

by Blue_Eyes

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You’re welcome. :)

July 25, 2008

by trident

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Thanks for the review. I’m a firm believer of people forming their own conclusions – some do others don’t. Having said that – “Penny drops” is a metaphor – not meant to be taken literally.

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Unsure about your goals for this as “non-fiction.” However, I do like your word choice. All these words are crisp and pointed. I’ll check out your longer pieces.

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July 28, 2008

by trident

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BTW – I just uploaded my first short story. I hope you have a chance to check it out.

July 28, 2008

by trident

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I assure you this is my life story. ;-)

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You say a lot in just six words.  I like.  I had to read it a couple of times to get it, but “no matter”.  Bonus points for the rhyme and two-word sentence symmetry.

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July 28, 2008

by trident

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thanks! that’s a great compliment.

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I like it!  Write no matter what.  We are all driven that way, aren’t we?

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July 27, 2008

by sjvance

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ME TOO!  LOL  

July 26, 2008

by trident

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Thanks. I just wish a few pennies would drop into my pocket. :~(

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i read ur peace….i havent ever read one like it…it was very differenet and alittle uncle to mean didnt make much sense in a way.

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July 27, 2008

by trident

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;-) My lips are sealed.

July 25, 2008

by Blue_Eyes

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Allow me to translate:

“I read your piece. I have never read one like it. It was very different and a little unclear to me, and did not make much sense (in a way).

July 24, 2008

by alexianx

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...what?

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This is very different…it has a unique flavor to it, and that adds to it. The word choices make the reader question what it may be about, and that gives the piece strength. The staccato punctuation of the period usage is extremely effective, as well.

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July 26, 2008

by trident

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Thanks – usually (to quote a line from my favorite movie) “the nail that sticks up get’s hammered”. I’m pleased to note there are quite a few exceptions on this site.

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hi there,

something tells me you write lyrics for songs/which i do too, and have dropped things on my keyboard/but i stink anyway, so it don’t matter..the matter/clatter ryhme also is clever..(another clue of a songwriter..:)..nice one, jim

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July 26, 2008

by trident

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Hi Jim,
Thanks. That’s a great interpretation. I’m actually a bit afraid of poetry, and am not sure where to start with lyrics, but I’m keen to give it a go. Gimme some pointers!

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Nice picture you paint, for if one were consumed by the pianist you would not notice the coin. Nice one! Good luck.

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July 26, 2008

by trident

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Wow! I’m impressed with your vision – I think you’ve added to this immensely, and it just goes to show that a 6-word story is only as vibrant as the mind of the reader.
Cheers!

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it sounds like you are intensely focused when writing, nice.

I think this speaks of concentration with brevity.