Romance / Never Finished (Analysis)

Very good. We often finish, but hardly ever end our really good stories. Well done.

This is a very touching, sincere and truly awesome piece of work within it’s six small words that speak volumes, as it hits to the heart of something that most all of us have experienced, sadly too often on more than one occasion.  A very eloquent statement carrying much weight of truth, heart, soul and love laced with longing and a burning desire to finish what has been left unfulfilled.  A truly remarkable read that serves the poet as well as the reader in all the indelible courses of heart and spirit.  Excellent and one of the best I have come across in many many days.  Great job!!!

Nice – try swapping the words and the tense – my story ended, but never finished

i read ur peace and it was pretty good, the one thing that got me was it never ended. if the story is over it has t end. well unless u ment it to be a cliff hanger.