it does have a spiritual connotation. if u want to read abt it, i commented on ELBSeattle’s review further down the page. thanks for your feedback!!!
Non-fiction / Six Word Memoir
Dark to light, natural to supernatural!!
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ELBSeattle reviewed Version 1 -
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I don’t understand what this is supposed to mean.
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eminemslove85 reviewed Version 1 -
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that was a very good quote that u wrote. i enjoyed it
trident reviewed Version 1 -
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makes sense, but doesn’t really convey any imagery cues.
Gardenia reviewed Version 1 -
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To me this has a spiritual connotation. I like it.
Cleveland reviewed Version 1 -
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Interesting concept of contrast.All or nothing comes to mind.
Best of luck for sharing this poem.
ValCapone reviewed Version 1 -
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This isn’t a story yet. Develop this so it inspires questions, as in the Hemingway baby shoes example.
JessicaHumiston reviewed Version 1 -
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I would get rid of the ! or just leave one. this is because you don’t really need them. also, and this is just a personal opinon, i would have said light to dark, becasue most unnatural things happen in the dark. like the consept though.
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