Flash Fiction / Six Word Memoir - "Paper" (Analysis)

I’m writhing, smothered in scrap paper.

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September 07, 2008

Bendo13

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63	84.6% (13 votes)	22.6%

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26	M	Lock Haven, PA	November 03

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August 01, 2008

madeliaette

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6	83.3% (6 votes)	100.0%

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42	F	Australia	October 29

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July 19, 2008

blueeyes

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30	F	Queen Creek, AZ	September 14

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nice, now this is good.

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July 18, 2008

psychothriller

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11	33.3% (3 votes)	31.0%

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49	M	United States	July 18

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July 18, 2008

janejkus

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6	60.0% (5 votes)	41.2%

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It leads me in two directions…one exhausion and discouragement…..uninspried and “smoothered in scrap paper” paper you’re thrown away discouraged that it didn’t say what you were trying to say and you had to start again.

two smoothered in scrap paper like the scraps of paper I use to write on when inspiration strikes….and Ihae a ton of them so inspiration could be pleatiful but I feel get a feeling of discouragement…like all my unfinnished poems laying in wait for me to make them complete…..like michealngelos last peita and other statures that were tring to escape from the stones but he left there reaching out to us to be saved….finnished.