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i mean that makes a point, but where is the art in it?  if you are seeking only truth, then it works.

suppression and expression
I appreciate the contrast in simple language.
I’m not sure the language isn’t too simple, but the power is there.

I think this would be better started with a capital, so “Former drug addict, now I write.” It tells a nice, short story, of writing helping you through bad times, and I think that’s a good memoir.

I’m glad to see former before addict,and hope you channel all your thoughts through your poetry.dont know how you feel about religion but think that might be a good choice of a topic for your poetry.If you are not  religous at all then trow out that last part lol. but hope all goes well with your new oppertunity.

wayne

the best thing is that it could be taken either as a fact or as a sarcastic quip, offering the reader a choice. The worst thing is the word former has a small f not capital F letter.

Simple, and direct.
Very clean.

wow! congratulations for getting off the drugs. And by you writing now, it makes me think you beat the addiction by getting serious about life. A lot of thought and emotion go into writing. Thanks for sharing. Good work!

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Thank you

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