Short Story / "Us" (Analysis)

Our DNA: One Creative, Brilliant Baby.

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August 09, 2008

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July 21, 2008

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July 18, 2008

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July 18, 2008

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It has the virtue of being a very original entry. Though it comes off as pompous and will rub readers the wrong way. At least it did me. It’s nearly impossible to set up a joke and pay it off in 6 words I suppose is the difficulty here.

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July 18, 2008

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Nice.
I like that this is a short commentary that seems to imply the change that came about when I became we, before us.

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Age: 43
Loc: Berrien Springs, MI
Gen: F
Last Login: July 20
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