Flash Fiction / 6 words

Kids, heartache, love, lust, dispair, hope.

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August 28, 2008

Bullyshero

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0	63.6% (11 votes)	100.0%

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61	F	Gladstone, MI	December 21

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July 18, 2008

Sharon

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724	88.1% (243 votes)	27.6%

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40	F	Mentor, OH	March 19

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July 18, 2008

malapropist

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102	95.8% (48 votes)	34.5%

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33	M	United States	September 04

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Yeah, this would sum up the writing life. But, these are abstract concepts (except for kids, which is kind of the odd man out here). The winners are going to be concrete examples, something tangible that expresses a feeling. I would also recommend focusing on one. You can’t cover the entire range of human experience in six words. What’s one theme you’ve returned to often? Make it personal. Good luck.