There is a wonderful literary tradition of poetic, romantic males… but I understand the sentiment… or lack thereof. Cheers.
Journal, Diary, & Blogging / A life of love (Analysis)
Love is only two parts joy.
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But then i wonder, what is the other part? If its what i think it is, then you have your parts mixed up. Love is misery.
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What are the other parts? How many other parts are their to love? This might come from another saying that I don’t know of so I’m a bit confused by it. Sounds like a good quote if I understood the full meaning.
A statement of feelings but I do not see the memoir in it, unless the feeling sums up your life as a whole. But who knows, I am only a man…and men don’t do well with poetic romanticism…i’d love to see more of your writings.
This is simply beautiful. The real mystery you’ve created comes through the world “only”; how many parts are there to Love? Apply the fact that it’s only two PARTS to the idea of “joy”, and we are instantly convinced that some part is sorrow, or pain, etc. You have really managed to say a lot in these words. Good luck in the contest, but I don’t think you’ll need it!
so true and makes me ask; if there is a formula, what is it?
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