Poetry / word (Analysis)

Tapestry creaks a bit. A weave? (maybe, too many w’s… but it is not necessarily a bad thing)

These 6 words hold a lot of meaning.  The connection between “tapestry” and the threads of the world can be deeply investigated by the reader.  Furthermore, this reminds me of Emerson’s essay The Poet in which he discusses that every word was once a story. Simple yet complex, I like it!

Interesting, I’m just not sure how it relates to you specifically. That’s my only real criticism. I think it’s definitely a clever use of so few words.

Impressive, brief but bold,a 10

Clear, emotive, encompassing yet succinct – the very epitomy of this contest.
I would change “word” to “(solitary) thread”.  

hi there,

not sure what you really mean/one word…but it sounds nice…:) if you have time, write me back and explain it to me..it’s maybe to deep for me…later, jim

A tapestry is a kind of wall hanging. Maybe i am not getting it. Could you replace the word Tapestry. It sounds good though.

it is so poetic; you are very talented to say so much in so few words.

awesome  !!!!!