brutal de la naissance à la mort (Analysis)

FTW, BTL, yet still you choose

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July 18, 2008

QuietPoet1

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July 18, 2008

PIMckenzie

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Of course you are going FTW “For The Win”, and you were Born To Live (I think)but there are so many interpretations that you may lose many, including me in the process. It may, BTW, HYC to GTW, and then ITB but YWW…
SWIM?
PIM

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July 18, 2008

by l_cipher

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Where I’m from, it means “Fuck The World” and “Born To Lose” – both of which I have tattooed on my hands. I really submitted that bit as a smart-ass remark.

July 19, 2008

by PIMckenzie

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If you use your “smart Ass” sense of humor and fill it with good stories, you will write some really good stuff and you’ll find that you really don’t need to use vulgarity to be funny and make your point.
I personally believe that people use vulgarity when they don’t know the right words to use. It’s also a personal choice, I can curse like a sailor but will that make my writing more pointed? I do not believe so.
Good luck.

July 19, 2008

by PIMckenzie

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BTW (By the Way) how did you come up with your title “Brutal from birth to death”?
You seem to indicate a lot of desperation in your choice of words, F the world, Born to lose etc. Why not try to look at it in a more positive way.

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