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Poetry / Six Word Memoir - The Recipe for a Miserable Life?
But I Could Have Done Better…
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There is much truth in this quote. Because life is short, bitter, and sweet it is imperative that we live it to the fullest, and best of our abilities. I walk away with a certain sadness, but with more urgeny than before to “follow through”. Well done!
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Yeah – that is the recipe to a miserable life. Right on!
I believe that you nailed it. I believe that we decide how are lives are. Yes, sometimes events will occur that our horrible and out of our control; but, if we continue to hit ourselves in the head and think about all the things you could have done better than our lives will only get worse and not better.
ha i like it, its quite witty in a way and to be honest there isnt much you can actually write in six words so well done…but i would suggest maybe changing the category? it doesnt look much like poetry to me
yes! that is so true….everyone could have done better at alot of things.
I think these six words can define a person at every milestone in their life. As humans we look back to see what we should of…even could of done differently. I think this captures a mentality held by a lot of people. Although it may seem cliche, I think it fits more than I can express.
We all feel that way but you have put it into words .Nice thought .Well put and had me thinking.
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