Poetry / Six Word Memoir - The Recipe for a Miserable Life?

But I Could Have Done Better…

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rossipossi avatar General Stranger

June 20, 2009

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I believe that you nailed it.  I believe that we decide how are lives are.  Yes, sometimes events will occur that our horrible and out of our control; but, if we continue to hit ourselves in the head and think about all the things you could have done better than our lives will only get worse and not better.

Mario007 avatar General Stranger

February 27, 2009

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ha i like it, its quite witty in a way and to be honest there isnt much you can actually write in six words so well done…but i would suggest maybe changing the category? it doesnt look much like poetry to me

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January 02, 2009

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There is much truth in this quote. Because life is short, bitter, and sweet it is imperative that we live it to the fullest, and best of our abilities. I walk away with a certain sadness, but with more urgeny than before to “follow through”. Well done!

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August 14, 2008

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I think these six words can define a person at every milestone in their life. As humans we look back to see what we should of…even could of done differently. I think this captures a mentality held by a lot of people. Although it may seem cliche, I think it fits more than I can express.

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July 23, 2008

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Yeah – that is the recipe to a miserable life. Right on!

BPL avatar General Stranger

July 18, 2008

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We all feel that way but you have put it into words .Nice thought .Well put and had me thinking.

eminemslove85 avatar General Stranger

July 18, 2008

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yes! that is so true….everyone could have done better at alot of things.

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