Hahaha, that made my night.
Humor/Satire / Velvet
baby jesus in velvet blue britches.
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kisstheskykneel reviewed Version 1 -
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niseag03 reviewed Version 1 -
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The fact that you marked it as humor/satire helps me follow where you are going with this, but over all it made me scratch my head in confusion. Its always a fine line to walk when you refer to God, Jesus, etc., and I think you did so successfully.
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mfrizz reviewed Version 1 -
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Love it. You definitely make the most out of your six words. I love that you used “britches,” and I love that they’re velvet. And everyone loves the baby Jesus.
bravis reviewed Version 1 -
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I like the imagery, but I’m not clear how it pertains to your life as a writer. I would write something more about you or writing or creativity. It’s got me thinking about what I’d write now though…
eminemslove85 reviewed Version 1 -
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i read ur thingy it was ok. i didnt know what you ment by it tho.
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