Flash Fiction / Six Word Story: The Writing Life

Write right! Delete, backspace, sigh. Again…

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Krysis avatar General Stranger

July 18, 2008

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July 17, 2008

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Hehe, very nice, very nice…  :)  

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July 17, 2008

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I like “write right!” however, “delete, backspace” sounds redundant.  If you just deleted something, would you really need to backspace too?  curious…

Overall, good effort.  Thanks.  

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July 17, 2008

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Good choice of words, we can all relate to that! the criticism i have is that it doesn’t provoke the imagination, which only six words needs to do to be effective. pretty good though!

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Loc: Williamstown, NJ
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