Non-fiction / 6 Word memoir III

Decent, but not very advanced.

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July 24, 2008

by Krysis

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Could you elaborate on what you mean “advanced?”

July 24, 2008

by JuneLyte

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I believe that it is good, but seems a bit elementary. It doesn’t realte well to many people or is something that you can think on very hard. Does that make sense? It is good, but I believe you can word it differently to make your point a little more “deep.”

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As a former editor I didn’t like questions, especially unanswered questions. Here you didn’t and I think I can take the subject two ways. First, I don’t think writers should write for the public. If so, writing greeting cards is a good field. With this train of thought I think you write for yourself, title it, and detach, comfortable with praise and criticism. Second, which is disconcerting, and I wish I didn’t read your notes, the memoir is a direct contradiction. I won’t comment on the notes. This isn’t fact, it’s just this reader deciding what the meaning is: you’ll write how you want but not open to criicism. I don’t think so. Questions without an answer gives away the writer’s empowerment, and in a way lets the reader finish writing the poem for you. An answer, would be ”. . . someone must.” I hope this helps and you get published.

I think this is a valid point.
Good flow, easy to understand

Ah.  I like the apathy.

I actually like this one quite a bit.