Non-fiction / 6 word memoir

Too comfortable. Let me out now

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s2poets avatar General Stranger

July 23, 2008

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A good start but this isn’t simply long enough to even rate..keep going.

Tez846 avatar General Friend

July 23, 2008

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I like this one a lot.  It says to me that normal life is mundane and sometimes or most of the time you want someone or something to throw a monkey wrench into the gears.

Fenvy avatar General Stranger

July 19, 2008

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It’s true to some extent.  The normalcy of life can reach it’s toll with it becomes too comfortable and the need for, lets say, speed is seeping its awesome way into breaking boredom.  That’s how I see your piece because that’s how I relate to it.

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July 17, 2008

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Ah, the trials and tribulations of being a human; forever stuck in the infinite abyss of the rat race.

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July 17, 2008

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I’m iffy on this. Not sure what I think of the use of “brevity,” when that’s the whole point.

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