Short Story / Clock

Sounds interesting, is there more ??

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August 03, 2009

by anaisnais

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No was no more with this title for 6 word memoir, just thought i’d give it a shot…However it may be one i write on further in future…as muse has started!  Thanks fo rstopping by to comment..

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I feel that there is something missing. The story leave a wide gap that leaves me unsatisfied.

To me it sounds christiany, and it is comforting. An image of God’s hands holding to yours helping you no matter what.

D.C

This clearly describes a clock, however, I’m unclear on its meaning as a memoir.  Perhaps it means that if we are diligent in our writing, just keep at it, we’ll be successful.  I’m not sure.

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July 28, 2008

by anaisnais

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Thanks for your impressions/reviews….I think historically we know time has been and always is there for us…ceaseless and never wearing out…the memoir side of the clock is looking back on past….although very much of the moment….this is meant to make the reader think a little…maybe its to deep?

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it don’t speak to me.

Is this something that would go on the front page of a newspaper?

Although this does describe a clock (with perhaps an allusion to hands steepled in prayer) does it really fulfill the criteria for a 6 word memoir?  

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July 26, 2008

by anaisnais

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Time is age old…steeped in historical memory…so yes I believe so.

August 24, 2008

by metaphoricalsimile

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ok.

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right to the point

I think this was a very brief but to the point summarization of a clock and its functions.