Thanks for the kind words, and you are generally on target.
Poetry / Six Word Memoir: Poet
Fingers, curled words on damp page.
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Marowit reviewed Version 1 -
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Being a personal fan of poems that emphasize the impact and power even the shortest of pieces can hold, I really enjoyed this.
I had to read it a few times—obviously—to fully grasp it, but I think that’s a characteristic of short pieces like this. They are meant to be read and reread to allow the meaning to sink in, in whatever form for the individual that meaning takes.
I believe it has a good chance of making the mark, and I wish you the best of luck!
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gting reviewed Version 1 -
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I am intrigued. I have many images running through my head. Damp words, caused by tears, curling in pain.
Probably very different to what you intended, but that in itself is good. You have created something very powerful from 6 words. Good job x
aprilrrobinson reviewed Version 1 -
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im lost. im not understanding it. i know each word i just dont get them put together so how can i say more really. maybe im just missing something or maybe im not the only one not seeing it. why dont you just take this one as a practice and try making another one or two
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