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stabbed my painting, burned my poems
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Hahaha, I think this poem is funny…it’s so short, but hits home. How many artists have felt like doing this, if they haven’t? Many. For six words, its very ground breaking, but a six word poem is still hard for me to fully take in, if that makes sense?
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ummm i liked it but after i read it i wanted to know “why would he do this”. i think every poem should have an explanation at least of the poets feelings. but i think in the 6 word you showed alot of emotion.
How unduly cruel and misinformed so called “experts” can be when it comes to art – or rather what they do not consider art. They are much like murderers and often recoil and eat their words once the beauty of a work has been seen by the eyes of those open to its message.
this is so close, (in my opinion) to great. I love stabbed my painting, it shows someone giving everything they have to their art. But burned my poems doesnt fit as well, perhaps scratched my poems, or tore. something showing your working on them. to me, burning seems more like you hated and gave up. either way good luck!
not really to original, its like a musician saying
smashed my guitar, sold my amp
it’s humorous though
-whitey
The only thing that bothers me here is that this in no way nods to the important role of the critic in the art. Clearly that role is important, otherwise the artist would never know what the critic does; he wouldn’t care to be bothered with such things. That the critic’s words matter, positively or negatively, probably should be acknowledged.
Very well done with very strong words – words that felt like pain when I first read them. It made me wonder who did the stabbing/burning – the artist, a critic, or the artist in response to a critic? I love to read writings with more than one interpretation – anything that can make me think. Excellent!
It seems as though you are your worst critic. I believe that artist and writers are constantly changing and aware of a revolving world around us, as though by the time the piece has FINALLY been completed, it’s old news. It’s interesting to understand why you stabbed the art and burned the poems and not stabbed the poems and burned the art, but I have to believe that if you took the time to sweep up the pieces, you may have a complete masterpiece!
I really liked this. One thing I notice, though, maybe it would be better to have it as ‘paintings’ instead of ‘painting’? So it would be more encompassing? But that’s just me. Nice work.
I think you captured the tortured nature of the creative life quite well.
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