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“The only thing that divides us is our hatred towards each other and the only thing that unites us is a common hatred that threatens all of us.”

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DrChaos avatar General Stranger

July 16, 2008

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Very deep and good, a bit wordy though.  You may want to put this into 2 lines, removing the word “and”.  Also perhaps say ”...the hatred…” and ”...the common…”
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Willow_Wren avatar General Stranger

July 16, 2008

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Hmm, this assumes all people have hatred toward one another which is a false postulate, some of the people may have hatred for some of the people some of the time but not all of the people all of the time I think. Hate is a very strong word and I’m sure we all experience it at times. But how does hatred unite us all and threaten us all? I’m not sure exactly sure what this quote is trying to say as written. I would work on clarity on this one.                  

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