Poetry / My Babies (Analysis)

My grandbabies are my life
Never knowing how to be quiet
Happy and Healthy, it’s all good
As long as they can play and have food

I always want them to be safe from harm
Swimming and playing in the sun where it’s warm
Smart as a whip, that they are
I know that all of them will go very far

A fireman, police officer or surfer girl
No matter what it is they will give it a whirl
Not afraid of anything in their life
Thank God they don’t know the meaning of strife

They have nothing to do but be who they are
Knowing this they will always go far
Be the best that they can be
Knowing they will do this for them, not for me

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