Poetry / Love Stare (Analysis)
Love Stare
affectionately
soothing souls; enticing me
elevating love
{higher}
way above clouds
scattered loosely
like crumbs
from a cookie
\standing/
.staring.
aimlessly
as winds
sweep clean
the heavens
..steadily..
{I stare}
majestically
marveling
magnificently
melding into
mind the
wondrous feeling
I am experiencing
similar to love
{I am}
easily
enraptured
.................
envisioning
effortlessly
your eyes
ones that
elegantly pierce
through me
seeing the just
of me
not judging
or
critiquing
...thinking…
on what is in my mind
and
not just the swag the completes me
{she’s my}
mochachocohotlatte
blessed solely
with an hot bo-dy
{lol}
beauty befits
her
bountifully
....as….
fragrant
pheromones
completely surround
me
arouse
me
seductively
she be
can’t help
but stare
absentmindedly
as this love
is reminiscent
of school girl’s
playing with flag ribbons
I remember
I useta love
them girls
from august
till the end of november
winter time
sidelined
prepubescent amour
reflection
just my excuse
back them
was my immature perception
but now
I can fully
understand
why love is
closely related
to a stare
guess I can feel it
because love is in thee air
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love connected through a stare wonderful way to make a poem.
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I enjoyed the feeling I got from this. Spoken word is an appropiate venue for this piece. Should try reciting in Harlem at an Open Mic Night.
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