Poetry / Bad Actors ( Clowns)
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in morning sunrise
lies linger upon his lips
explaining absence
revealing drunken mind state
performing pre-written scenes
the stage was now set
words creating impromptus
forgetting the script
roles being jumbled
juggling theories like clown
his sins being found
amongst the little white lies
twisted carnival reside
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I hate circus acts.
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“roles being jumbled
juggling theories like clown
his sins being found
amongst the little white lies
twisted carnival reside ”....sick yo….i see you still doin your thing….love this one as usual…very well written…the facades and lies lived…lay deep seeded in emotions never explored….great piece…..Kwest.
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This is exquisite and very well put I might add…You are certainly publishable…a very very rare talent…(we must not hate on you) I can go on and on explaining this piece…however I will spare the traditonal collegiate response and just say that I think this piece is one of your classic signatures!!!!!
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