Poetry / none of my poems rhyme (Analysis)

I like this. Its short, simple, and straight to the point. If it were another poem I’d probably say how “rhyme” and “time” is an obvious rhyme, but I like this poem for what it is. Good job

Nice bit here. The beginning “so?” confused me a bit, but nothing that I could get around eventually. I like that this piece isn’t cliche. It stands on its own quite well without sounding tired or overdone.

Clever.

Interesting poem, but it doesn’t resonate with me.

Hah!  You made me smile.  Great form with the indent and break around “so?”  I enjoy the attitude this piece has.  Perfect choice of words and I actually think the lack of capitalization does something for this piece.  Good choice of punctuation as well.  Keep up the good work!

-Melissa

It actually rhymes! How ironic! Good piece I know it’s frustrating getting reviews about poetry when people say no rhyme scheme! Keep working at it! Good job

I actually really liked this. It was short straight and to the point. That’s just the way a lot of writing should be.

I love this.  Deceptively simple, witty, charming.  Great poem!

nice
short
to the point

my review doesn’t rhyme, either

that was cute and straight to the point. i like it that could be a kids poem.