Thank you for your suggestion, however, I simply have no more thoughts on what to say- that’s why I left it so.
Journalism / This goes out to the ones who fall in love (Analysis)
Thousands of lost souls link together desperately trying to find one with similar qualities, yet none realizing they are lost, that no one is a fit, that they are a piece without a puzzle.
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Its a good start but it just seems like its sort of just there with no real meaning if you look at it as more of a story or an article. Writing the story in more of a poem form might work better for what your trying to get across.
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